Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dangerous. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Staying healthy is a major factor for individuals to survive on this planet. Presently, majority of masses have tendancy to use alternative form of medicines to get rid from diseases. Nevertheless, a considerable number of people consider that this practice has obvious outcomes whereas others assert, it could be perilous form for human being. Here, I would like to accord with the given statement , these methods are ineffective .
Multifarious points could be taken to endorse my viewpoint. First and foremost, alternative form of medicines such as herbal medicines and homoeopathic which are utilised by mankind, enable them to cure headache, heartburn, diabetes, hypertension and so on. Beside this, ancient times of medicines are inexpensive as compared to modern ones. Therefore, people are more likely to get alternative medicines due to its various benefits.
Furthermore emphasises on my opinion, humankind have positive attitudes about acupuncture and reflexology therapies. They attain relief from body-pain like as bad-back or sour-knees through these therapies. Apart from it, alternative medicines have also fewer side effects since they are made naturally whereas people have to encounter distinct ailments by using allopathic medicine instead of escaping body. As a result, this phenomenon is ubiquitous and safe for mankind and therefore they passionate to use it.
In conclusion, it is well said that everything is both boon and bane for people. Although, alternative form of medicines is lucrative for masses to protect body from sever diseases, however I still believe that government should educate individuals about all type of medicines before taking them so that they can provide overall approach to make healthy patients
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, well, whereas, apart from, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6015037594 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9517165981 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665413533835 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.0229548646 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.428571429 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.78571428571 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216050594623 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704517610627 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457257319793 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12905224582 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376512681254 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.