Dangerous sports should be banned while many believe that people should be free to do any sport. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Athletics are important aspect of modern life as they provide opportunities for fitness, recreations and entertainment. However, some sports pose greater dangers to individuals the others, and it can be agreed that governments may need to prohibit hazardous activities. Personally, I believe that sports are choice for human, and while regulations may be necessary, banning them is not a viable opinion.
It is irrefutable that certain sports can create dangers for citizens and some are inherently dangerous than others. Whether those danger arise from physicality or fierceness within team competition, or safety threats from extreme activities, the lives and health of participants are at risk. With the threat of injury or harm, people are better to be protected, which could mean that ban are necessary. For instance, studies have shown that concussions rising from physical team sports have long-term adverse health effects.
Conversely, sports could bring happiness to players. Many people choose to compete against others, or stretch themselves to the limits, despite any risks, in order to get satisfaction from those activities. Beating a competitor often provide athletes with a tremendous amount of pride and joy. Specifically, many people dream of reaching the pinnacle of sports, where fierce competitors can even be seen shedding tears of joy upon being crowned a champion.
In summary, considering the debate above, I believe people should have the choice to decide themselves. Athletes, competitors and thrill-seekers alike are typically well-aware of any risks involved. While some sport present threats to those who participate, many people choose to continue in those sporting pursuit despite risks they aware of, banning the sport is unnecessary.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 126, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this danger' or 'those dangers'?
Suggestion: this danger; those dangers
...herently dangerous than others. Whether those danger arise from physicality or fierceness wi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, however, if, may, so, well, while, for instance, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1508.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60594795539 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94196525256 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628252788104 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5945170836 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.714285714 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2142857143 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07142857143 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309508329182 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958677845158 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719291761359 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182138257431 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419523889557 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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