Parents often give children everything they ask for and do what they like. Is it good for children? What are the consequences when they grow up?
The young are getting used to being given everything they demand by their parents, which does harm to their self-development. Fulfilling every children’s requirement therefore leads to their lack of discipline and determination as well as their extravagant habit of using money.
First and foremost, parents should consider thoughtfully before satisfying every their children’s expectation because it can ruin the discipline. At the age of 3 to 15, children are curious of their surroundings and want their parents’ buy things for them such as toys. But they are too immature to realize what should be bought and how to play things smartly, they just want to bring home what attracts their attentions. If parents give them what they are fond of without control and guidance, the children will form gradually their habit of requiring their parents everything they need. Obviously, when their demands are not met, they become unpleasant, try to break the laws and disobey their parents. On the other hand, as the children are given things easily, they do not know how difficultly people have to try in order to make things belong to them. In those teenagers’ minds, all things they want can be bought by their parents’ money and they do not have to do their almost to pursuit their dreams anymore. Last but not least, the negative influence of this issue is children’s unreasonable way of spending money. Many teenagers nowadays possess things as easy as a pie, so they keep on using money out of control. This brainless action sooner has an adverse effect on them in the future, because the teenagers have no longer chance of being dependent on their parents. They have to stand on their own foot to make a living then uneconomical spending pushes them into the poor condition
To summarize, parents should not gratify children’s desire for everything due to several consequences above. Instead of committing this unthoughtful action, parents are suggested to teach their offsprings clever method of using and making materialistic value like money
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, then, therefore, well, as to, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1749.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18991097923 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97368169138 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557863501484 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.150801739 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.928571429 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0714285714 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291120655274 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115558128085 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0819845757006 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179766512991 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0820771528021 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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