Body shaming is a growing issue, fators induce and consequences

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Body shaming is a growing issue, fators induce and consequences

Student's name: My Ngoc Vu
Block M1
Lauren Durkee
April 6th, 2017

BODY-SHAMING ISSUE

In the wake of social development, we human seem to over-look the “ideal” physical appearance. Therefore, there is a growing trend of either criticizing others’ bodies or constantly offering tips about how to hide our “imperfection” whilst actually much less knowing our appearance. Each and every person enables himself right of commenting others’ body-size without hesitation. This paper was designed to investigate some of the facets to the issue, regarding the justifications as to why body-shaming becomes such a growing issue; the factors induce it and the detrimental consequences.
Body image is a term used to describe the subjective mental representation an individual develops regarding his or her body based on “sensory, motor, and affect (both pleasurable and unpleasurable) (Knafo, pg.1). Susan Harter found that “at every developmental level, the evaluation of one’s looks takes precedence over other domains as the top-concern” (p.134) Body-shaming is the action or practice of humiliating someone by making mocking or critical comments about their body image (shape and size). In the present world, slenderness of the female figure is generally preferred, and being overweight, “obese”, or “fat” comes with the range of negative cannotations and social implications (Knafo pg.2). Admittedly, the more desirable and idealized the body image is, the more universally body-shaming occurs. In the context that these terms are as inextricably linked as a chicken and an egg, body shaming is frequently mentioned and analyzed with the notion of body image.
First, let analyze why people ridicule other’s body. In the history of mankind, there have been hundreds records of freedom of speech in the form of wars. Many had sacrificed themselves for the freedom of speech today; therefore, people may probably feel free to spit their words out. At public settings, it seems to be inappropriate to poke fun of someone on basis of sex, race or private life, whilst, body size is still acceptable topic to exploit. Besides, the theory of downward social comparison suggests that we can make ourselves feel better by comparing ourselves to someone of lower status. Also, it is irrefutable that body-shaming manifests in various ways, which often lead to the comparison, shame and perpetuates the idea of imperfect physical features. For those primary reasons, “body” joke may still be round.
Second, it is worth examining the inducement of physical looking criticism. To start with, the pressure and comparison of sociocultural on individuals at the very young age is also clearly seen to be an inextricable link to body-shaming. “The societal pressures on female to achieve a mere standards is so pervasive that children begin to hear, internalize, and imitate at young ages, beginning at round 5 or 6” (Knafo, pg.7) That is to say, starting at early time when we were little girls, we were imposed on to the belief that girls need to have low fat, long legs, beautiful hair. Lingerie commercials like Victoria Secret convince you only thin women look like angels. In fact, most of the girls' first toy, a doll, has been designed to be a role model with ideal body shape. A study demonstrating the susceptibility of young girls to the influence of dolls as messages about thinness and body ideals has concluded that children do take the perspective of the doll on their identity, and inevitably desiring their physical qualities ( Knafo pg.8) . This pressure grows even more dominant at the stage of puberty, the roughest time when teenagers have to undergo significant changes, both physically and mentally. They begin to have better understanding of self-evaluation by means of multi social media, feedback from their peers, and interaction with many other sources. All these sources of impact can be referred to the term “the looking glass”, which is the way people see themselves through interactions with others, based upon how others might perceive them (Knaofo pg.2), These adolescents, in an attempt to achieve such ideal bodies, have manipulated themselves into the mold created by "society”. General speaking, the cultural standards of attractiveness endorsed by society have successfully penetrated people’ minds on a large basis. Last but not least, as international media companies expand across the world, the growing popularity and uniformity of flawless beauty is causing worldwide concern. So, “the mass media are generally agreed to be an influential source of images and messages about the idealized body that women and girls are expected to strive for “ ( Monro pg.85) . To explain it further, those global entertainment enterprises affect people minds by reshaping perception, belief of ordinary citizens about the perfect looking. Most of the concepts promoted by the leading mainstream media are of fashion and model origin. They value and feature body proportion which they consider perfect - " curvaceously slender, physically appealing and unrealistically thin” (Whyte pg.823). Unfortunately, many people now blindly imitate broadcasted models, causing the alteration to their perceptions of bodies. The perceptions of ideally thin on billboards, magazine covers, television commercial and celebrity, due to nationwide coverage, have become so widespread that even 3-year-old girls are reported to absorb those kind of messages promoting specific standards to the body. It is statistically proven that the exposure of topic regarding ways to lose weight most effectively, dieting usually obtain higher views compared to other fields in the articles. As a result, we the viewers, unexpectedly but constantly have been bombarded with the fallacy that only thin people deserve to be well-treated.
Undoubtedly, body-shaming is a burning issue these days despite no matter how we tackled on a war footing; it profoundly poses threats on human health and well-being. There are evidences that body-shaming triggers death and other mental-physical health problems. One reason I believe that body shaming is never an acceptable issue is because of the result in overall low-self-esteem. “Self-esteem is usually considered to be a key indicator of psychological health and social life adjustment; its link with academic success and achievement has been emphasized in decades of theory and research” (Dorak pg.554). Body-shaming influencing people differs person from person. For some teenagers, satisfaction with their physical appearance plays a critical role in their developmental process and becomes the central determinant of their sense of self (Dorak pg.554). It even drastically grows with adult’s perspective. If the body facilitates the opportunities for ones to attain the goal, then they are fortunate to adjust to it. On the other hand, the body might be perceived as the restriction to the success of individuals, for they feel that they have been impeded. According to Zumpf and Harter, the fact that outward appearance becomes such a significant places those at risk of social-motional problems. It contributes directly to negative evaluations about oneself. A person thus underestimates her core values, but considers appearance more influential than any other aspects of her internal world. She is now more concerned about how they appear to others rather than how they truly feel. She unexpectedly has lost her sense of identification, which comes from the feelings inside, to desperately avoid those hurtful comments from the society. Furthermore, It is such a pathetic matter in present world that a person's appearance being used as standard means to decide how she is treated. In this way, body surveillance regarding the intervention of body shame has reached a level of inhumanity and gone against the moral behaviors. Opponents to this issue have rightly argued that body-shaming is a harmless joke, it is not even a crime or a criticism. However, a recent study conducted by Common Health finds that "the sort of weight-based discrimination that he experienced is not just unpleasant and stressful; it may actually lead to premature death” ( Newell). Joking about man’s appearance both intentionally and unintentionally is not that kind of weapons killing others, but malicious words do. It is not an exaggerating problem when it comes to life-and-death. Scientifically, body-shaming triggers suicidal thoughts, which apparently result in higher mortality risk. To illustrate, the authority nutrition Website had conducted research in a study of 2,436 people. It showed that extreme obesity was associated with 21 times greater risk of suicidal behavior and 12 times greater risk of suicide attempts. That is to say, people who were made fun of on by their body shapes may think that they do not belong to this society in which they are being treated as an outcast because of their body shapes. In some other cases, people want to lose weights immediately by starving themselves to death or drinking kinds of deadly medicine. Things continue to worsen when those who suffer from weight-harassment decide to take risk in cosmetic surgery. In addition, eating disorder is another detrimental effect of idealized body exposure. Due to the depression, people will eat more calories and feel less in control of their eating, sample of natural human reaction. This way or another, eating disturbance habit will cause obesity, predict later risk of poor functioning, and reiterate a circle of body-shaming. Last but not least, body shaming also does harm to mental health of victims such as depression, panic … to many but a few. The present problem is that body shaming has gone too far to its extreme and it is, to some extent, an invisible killer under specific circumstances.

What is actually needed is proper education to self-respect. First and foremost, we should learn to identify things that make us upset about the situation. By doing it, we will step by step recognize the value of self-image. Then, spending time with those who have body-positive and refuse to comment on other’s appearance will enhance the positive outlook. It sounds awkward to network with people making fun on other’s look. Furthermore, we are better learning to confront people perpetuating body-shaming than evading it. Last, the solution lies in our attitude. Finding out part of our bodies we love most would promote the confidence and respects for ours.
To conclude, body shaming issue, in all seriousness, rises a concerning matter. It is better late than never, to have deep insights into this prevalent issue, and take steps halting it to the best of one’s ability since a person should not be shouldered by her physical look.

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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
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Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 59.0 10.4138276553 567% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 39.0 7.30460921844 534% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 128.0 24.0651302605 532% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 244.0 41.998997996 581% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 40.0 8.3376753507 480% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 9227.0 1615.20841683 571% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 1698.0 315.596192385 538% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43404004711 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 6.41925194677 4.20363070211 153% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17734493052 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 827.0 176.041082164 470% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487043580683 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 2881.8 506.74238477 569% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 31.0 5.43587174349 570% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 24.0 2.52805611222 949% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 10.0 0.809619238477 1235% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 23.0 4.76152304609 483% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 74.0 16.0721442886 460% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.4255079211 49.4020404114 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.689189189 106.682146367 117% => OK
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Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 39.0 8.67935871743 449% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 30.0 3.9879759519 752% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203057194649 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0471320210908 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622694452413 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111896646934 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636953557731 0.056905535591 112% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 495.0 78.4519038076 631% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.67 Out of 6
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