The dangers and complexities of the modern world have made the mobile phone an absolute
necessity for children.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and
experience. Write at least 250 words.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
One of the significant advances in technology is the development of communication methods over the world. the mobile phone is the must for each person to keep touch with others around him not only for family members. The mobile phone with the children from some point of view not necessary because it waste them time, although that a clear dissatisfaction from all parents but comparing with benefits of using the childrens for mobile will not be a valid reason to keep them away from it.
Firstly, will found the mobile is very important for parents to keep in touch with them kids for anything happen for them suddenly or need thm help in anywhere and anytime. In other hand parents can know what them kids doing by using new technologies of tracker and keep them safe from all the dangerous and any complexities they can face in them day. That bright side of using mobile need from parents to upgrade them kids the awareness of using mobile and how to use it in useful way.
Secondly, as technology around our kids we must let them involve in it in wise way and that what is make them safe more from any dangerous. The mobile phone for children in our era not only for keeping touch with people around, but too to make them personality and helps them to build them future. Example, personal profiles for travelers and dreamers that effect in a lot of people around the world and the creators just a children's, that makes mobile phone more important to be with our children's.
Shortly, we can find in all technology around us a good and bad sides but everything depends on our usage for it, improving our children for mobile using makes them usage more useful and impact positively in them life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: The
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Message: Did you mean 'wastes'?
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Suggestion:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62828947368 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39397535247 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483552631579 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.0245856688 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.7 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.4 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17901004994 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911877394102 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375304351799 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128549822316 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365555263221 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.17 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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