The dangers of smoking are well known, yet many people continue with this habit.
What are the causes of this? How can we reduce smoking in society?
Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Non- profit organization are raising awareness that smoking could have detrimental effect on one’s body. However, peoples already realized “What damage it does”, but still many of them continue to smoke. In my opinion, Educating people about the health benefits of reducing the smoking, can have some positive results.
Firstly, Most of the people are known about smoking and “What it does to their internal organs”. People who are smoking on a daily basis suffers from many health issues such as: Lung cancer, Damage to internal organs and Neurological problems. Regular smoking can also reduce one’s life span, mostly suffering from lung cancer. Meanwhile, Air exhaled after smoking can be inhaled by non-smokers which would also cause some health issues.
Secondly, Government should initiate programs, Such as: educating people about Health issues. Moreover, reducing smoke can have health benefits. Advertising is also another form of communication to peoples Like: Having an image. Movies plays major role by displaying positive effects, “Which can trigger” people and diverting them on a path of reduction. If Government wouldn’t impose any rules, it could have some catastrophic effects on people’s life. Finally, raising awareness is the crucial part in reduction of smoke.
In conclusion, although many of the people are aware about effects. Some people are still habituated like addicted. Smoking can be reduced with the help of Government as well as people.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1296.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65938864629 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83436726669 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620087336245 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.4458984868 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.0 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3125 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.375 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20246326903 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0818828322021 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483758456358 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149094796278 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297932460831 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 40.34 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.96 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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