Deforestation caused by human activity is happening in many part of the world, with serious results for the environment. What do you think can be done to solve this problem?
Support your opinion with reasons and examples from your own knowledge and experience
From shipping crates to paper bags. Logging supplies raw material for an array of products. It is without an untold harm to the environment, including deforestation and habitat loss. However, as an individual we could make our contributions to solve this issue.
Firstly, we both know that logging companies cut down the tree and provide wood as an essential material so that we could make lots of products such as paper or furniture and so on. In fact, there are varieties paper products could be reused and we tend to throw them away without thinking how to use them again. For instance, we tend to go shopping and bring our merchandises in paper bags that could be helpful in several times in your kitchens or picnics to keep your items in. these is an example of reusing the paper products that we could do easily.
Secondly, saving papers is one of the efficient way that we, as an individual could do to decrease the needs of using raw wood. A research showed that a tree was cut down to make one meter height of A4 papers and the office workers usually print out their documents in one side of these papers. By printing in both side of a paper, the papers demanded will be dropped by at least a half that could take steps to save our forests.
These actions are likely to small when compare with the negative impacts of deforestation caused by human activities. However, more responsible paper usage could restrain the demanding of wood which would save the forests.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so, at least, for instance, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1217.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64503816794 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50652955352 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568702290076 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0435310137 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6153846154 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0994679678302 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0425253161284 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384643584241 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0667991681073 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283403887375 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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