With deforestation, urban development and illegal hunting, many species are becoming endangered as they lose their habitat and some are even threatened to the point of extinction. Do you thibk it is important to protect animals? What measures can be taken to deal with this problems?
These days, there are many factors such as urbanization, logging, and illegal activities which contribute to the decline in the diversity of animal species, and some are on the verge of extinction. I think that people have many benefits when protecting fauna, and the government and individuals should take action to solve the problem.
Protecting animal species can bring many positive impacts on the balance of the ecosystem and the survival of humans. The first reason is that animals play a vital role in maintaining the natural habitat and ecosystem. They control the existence of other animals hence and help maintain an ecological balance. For instance, animal dropping is a source of fertilizer for plants, and living things go recycled. Therefore, if they are on the verge of massive extinction, the natural habitat is easily damaged, and uncontrol and humans hardly deal with the problems. Furthermore, animals are the main sources of food, medicine, and especially animal testing that people need for respiratory purposes. For example, new medications and treatments can be found by studying animal species, and animal testing are ensure the safety of human use. Thus, by saving the endangered species, we are trying to save none other than ourselves.
Both authorities and individuals should take action to prevent the endangerment of animal species. Firstly, the government should strictly ban regulations on poaching and illegal hunting, and deforestation which cause the decline of the population of flora. Animals should be allowed freedom rather than being kept in the capacity of zoos which leads to the loss of natural habitat, freedom, and breeding. Let them live where they want to maintain the number of species.
In conclusion, it’s vital to protect wildlife to maintain an ecological balance, and take several measures to ensure we do not do harm the animals surrounding us.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 805, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'ensured'.
Suggestion: ensured
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28382838284 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7676096177 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567656765677 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 10.0 0.809619238477 1235% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5675506155 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.733333333 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.26666666667 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210384838946 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674016956068 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357557278896 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120033494581 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0255431331979 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.