Demand for food is increasing worldwide.
What is the cause of this? What measures can the international community take to meet this demand?
The need for food has become higher and higher day by day at an alarming rate all around the world. Due to population booming has occurred in a lot of countries, many places are desperate for things to eat. However, every developed country is distributing its supplies for these places that suffer from lack of food as a solution that most suitable for the current situation.
Population booming is the main reason lead to the rise of demanding for food. In addition, most countries especially developing countries can’t control their birth rate and make their residents increased more and more. Furthermore, the lessons for teaching citizens about sex education are still not known in many regions guide to unwilling pregnancy. For example, a pregnant girl in countryside regrets not knowing about birth control pill sooner due to the lack of knowledge about sex education.
Supplying food from countries particularly developed countries are given out at an ease pace to places that required food. In fact, these developed countries raise higher wage for the farmer to increase the outcome of their products and lower tax that charge for farmer to give more moral support in their work. Additionally, farmer from places that require for food has their salary increase in order to make products and help their own country. For example, demand from places needing for food decrease by 10 % in all around the world because of the help from inside and outside of these countries.
To be concluded, the most trouble problem that make the need for supplies especially in food higher and has occur in many countries is population booming. Therefore, a proper resolve for this question is the help from many developed countries by raise wage for farmer and give moral support in work to increase their products that can help for requiring countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, so, still, therefore, for example, in addition, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09477124183 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.575865614 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.480392156863 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5107821244 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.923076923 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5384615385 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167219234828 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071827081275 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439760341092 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115320034228 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220422025911 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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