Detailed description of crimes a newspaper and TV can have bad consequences on society, So this kind of information should be restricted on media. However, some people think it provides useful information to help people stay alert. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this issue?
In recent years, the rapid development of media has provided a variety of selection, ranging from funny cartoons to some serious shows about crime. Some people propose that the detailed explanation of crime in such means of media shouldn’t be widely allowed since it affect the community badly. The counter-argument raised by objectors is that this section is important because it helps people to stay alert. In this essay, justification for both school of thoughts will be discussed.
On the one hand, specialized reports provide viewers with comprehensive views about the occurring issues. nowadays there is an increase of many unpredictable way of threatening victims for possessions and sexual activities. The more advanced society become, the more sophisticated these behaviors are. Therefore, if we are exposed to such crimes in early stage, they are high chances that we have a better preparation. For example, by viewing carefully the procedure of stealing phone of thiefs, who suit just like wealthy ones in order to make good impression, TV watchers can learn not to trust strangers.
On the other hand, another fact that should be taken into account is that seeing detailed documentaries about crime may affect viewers’ behavior and evoke emotion disorder. Many sociological studies have indicated that people, especially some youngsters have a tendency to follow unsuitable actions and harassments they say on TV and newspaper. This justification is reasonable, nevertheless, restricting crime contents on media couldn’t make things get better. Meanwhile, this should be parents and teachers who play an active role in educating kids to adjust their feeling in aggressive behaviors.
In conclusion, taking all of the above mentioned facts into account, it is my opinion that although careful description shouldn’t be banned, it’s content should be modified for less violence in order to be excepted by viewers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45333333333 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00425624 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6119095982 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.857142857 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256027623903 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747480434462 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494099436318 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139718766248 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0738883640921 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.26 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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