In the developed countries, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society ?Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of aging populations.
People who living longer than ever before in the industrial nations ia increasing. Although there will be undoubtedly be some negative consequences of this trend. Solutions can be taken to mitigate these potential problems.
There are a number of problems related to this trend. When people of retirements age ar bigger, the new generation does not have enough occupations, especial some job require long experience. For instant, in 2008, nearly 20.000 Vietnameses were unemployed . Many companies, corporations just want person who had enough qualified for the job such as work experience, wide knowledge area or even had to have more than 5 years working in that field so the adults or students who just graduated at university could not find a job. Another problem is the average life expectancy will be eligible to have the pension from government. Money will be laid out out every day. Furthermore, government also have to pay a huge amount of demanding for health care , insurance. And that is a big impact for government, especially developing countries.
However, there are several actions could be taken to solve the problems mentioned above . Firstly, government should chance the policy of aging retirement. In the modern life, elderly who age from 60 -70 still have a good health for productive working. So just those who are over than 70 can get the pension. Secondly, government could encourage the immigration in order to increase the number of working adults who pay taxes and work effectively. And finally, the money could be invest for various public services like health care, accommodation and transport facilities for the rising older citizens.
In conclusion, various measures can be taken to tackle the problems that are certain to arise as the population of countries grow older.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17808219178 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8342591612 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626712328767 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.250730989 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2222222222 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283179220303 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869250629941 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630517792268 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161834062822 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289805949568 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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