The chart below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projection for 2050.
The four pie charts illustrate the percentage of population in different age group in Yemen and Italy in 2000 and also a expectation populations in next five decades.
Overall ,it is clear that there are some difference between two countries. In Yemen ,the number of children took a vast majority amount in 2000. However ,in 2050 ,population of people who aged 15-59 seemed to be accounted for highest. Returning to the population in Italy ,populations from 15 to 59 years old had the highest proportion in both period.
As can seen from two pie charts in Yemen ,in 2000 ,people ages 15-59 stood at around 46,3% ,lower than 11% ,to compare with that age group in 2050. The proportion of children was highest with 50%.But this amount is expected to decrease approximately 15% in over 50 years. And finally ,those were over 60 just took a negligible amount in two years, around 4% and 6%.
Turning to the population in Italy ,the number of people aged 15-59 had the highest proportion in both time ( 61% in 2000 and 46,2% in 2050 ). Furthermore ,the age over 60 in this country is seemed to be increased nearly twice times ,from 24% to 42%.However, the youngest age group in Italy is predicted that has a sight go up in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1011.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 218.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6376146789 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59523069652 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 106.607317073 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573394495413 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6717783821 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.1 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 5.23603664747 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 1.69756097561 1119% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29383110087 0.215688989381 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121474202202 0.103423049105 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0972679124619 0.0843802449381 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207157515206 0.15604864568 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.064539554933 0.0819641961636 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.