It is true that people in modern world are expected to live longer than ever before. Although there will be some negetive effects caused by this trend, society and goverment could certainly take steps to tackle these potential issues.
As people live longer, it may cause several problems which will have a negative influence on people's lives. The main issue is that the population of the country is getting older, thus the proportion of young labour will also decrease. This means that the pension need to be delivered to more persons, while the amount of taxes, which is one of the main sources of the pension, will undoubtely decrease due to the lack of young labour. The pressure of the state's finances will affect citizens' lives in many aspects, especially reducing the quality of public services they received. For example, if the provided healthcare couldn't meet its increasing demand, some young ages will have to look after their elderly relatives at home, which will again severe the financial situation of the country.
There are several actions that the government could take to solve the future problems decribed above. Firstly, increasing the retirement age would be a simple method to increase the labour proportion, perhaps from 65 to 70. Nowadays, people of this age tend to be health enough to continue their productive works. Secondly, it would also be great to encourage immigration in order to increase the number of young people who pay taxes. Finally, the usage of the nation budget need to be redesigned. More money should be spent on vital healthcate, accomodation and transport facilities rather than some leisure facilities, for example.
In conclusion, various measurements could be taken to mitigate the problems that are certain to arise as the population of the country get older.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12416107383 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56035870378 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607382550336 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0061219805 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.071428571 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260527730568 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0813749909428 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463424931691 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162599402626 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273750342456 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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