The procedure of using geothermal energy to produce electricity was illustrated by the diagram.
Overall, it is a method that transfers cold water to the electricity by using the heat of geothermal and a generator.
First of all, the transformation of the form of water was shown in the diagram. First, the cold water pumped down through a tube of 4.5 km and then enter the injection well. then, it will be passed through the geothermal zone which was underground and made by many hot rocks. Finally, the water will become hot and enter the production well to pump up to the condenser which set on the ground.
After that, the hot water will arrive at the condenser and transfer to the stream. Meanwhile, those stream from the condenser will provide power to the turbine and make it run so as to turn on the generator that will produce electricity.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 175, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Then
...5 km and then enter the injection well. then, it will be passed through the geotherm...
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Line 7, column 177, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...de power to the turbine and make it run so as to turn on the generator that will produce...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, so, then, well, while, as to, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 708.0 1615.20841683 44% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 150.0 315.596192385 48% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 4.20363070211 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67651514723 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 176.041082164 47% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553333333333 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 213.3 506.74238477 42% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.7856862964 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.5 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11676219181 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605916145165 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0763802948873 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10296763561 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0832670043641 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 78.4519038076 33% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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