The difference between the rich and the poor in the world today seems to be increasing.What do you think are causes of this?What,if anything, should be done to stop this from happening?
The differentiating line between the rich and the poor is widening day by day. The rich are getting richer and the poor are becoming poorer with passage of time. Many contributing causes are there for this alarmingly rising difference.
To begin with, worldly possessions and thirst of owing newer developmental items like latest models of cell phones or laptops are the one's primarily responsible for the markedly rising difference. Moreover, educational oppertunities are more for the rich and affording. Hence, they only get platform to becomes professi...
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in the essay above,there are
in the essay above,there are only two mistakes but still i got 7.am i lacking in vocabulary or examples quoting?
The following attributes are
The following attributes are not high:
No. of Different Words: 156 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.065 4.7
and you only put one sentence for the fourth paragraph. This is another reason to get only 7.0.
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get platform to becomes professionals
get platform to become professionals
Sentence: Moreover, educational oppertunities are more for the rich and affording.
Error: oppertunities Suggestion: opportunities
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 273 350
No. of Characters: 1373 1500
No. of Different Words: 156 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.065 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.029 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.768 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 100 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 76 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 56 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 33 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.666 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.462 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.373 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.637 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.104 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5