Nowadays many people move in to developed countries for better job and life. This essay assess the benefits and drawbacks of this trend.
To begin with, the major reason why people move in abroad is the attractive salary packages in these nations for professionals. Professionals, in developing nations, such as doctors, engineers and nurses will be in huge debt at the end of their professional course due to the education loan they took from bank in order to complete their studies. Unfortunately, the salary packages is too low for these professions in their home countries. Thus, they became forced to go abroad in search of better salary so that they can pay their debt on time. Developed countries have a better salary scale for these professions which is four times higher than the developing nations. For example, I am a nurse working in Kuwait for the past six years and i get a salary which is six times higher than that i get in India. Another point is, living and working in a different country is a opportunity to learn a new language and tradition which enhance knowledge about the world . People who living in one country for life time are often narrow minded and they have a blind belief that their religion and rituals are more valued than others.
On the other hand, there are some negative aspects for this trend. Firstly, coping with different culture and language is not as easy as many think. Many migrants ended up in jails in the foreign countries because they did not know about he culture and laws there. During the court hearings they could not express their part as they are not aware of what is being asked. Secondly, some citizens in the developed countries have a negative view about the migrants and there are many incidents about the violence against the foreigners by the local people. For example, the numerous incidents of violence took place in Australia against Indian students a few years ago. Finally, leaving relatives in home country and living alone in another country causes gaps in relationship and these gaps eventually leads to break up in relationship.
To conclude, living and working in a distant country have many advantages as well as the disadvantages. And each people have to takes decision about which is better for them living in a foreign country or home country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example, such as, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1931.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 398.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85175879397 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56324698607 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507537688442 0.561755894193 90% => OK
syllable_count: 607.5 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3052068012 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.631578947 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9473684211 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78947368421 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192739600575 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064871231171 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0836797948022 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147840124667 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108578894931 0.056905535591 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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