Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living and working in a foreign country?

Essay topics: Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living and working in a foreign country?

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It is a glaring fact that people leave there home country and settle and look for jobs in outside. hopefully, there are advantages as well as disadvantages in living a foreign country. I will justify my points below.

To begin with, the people who are working in a foreign country are able to get a good income and save for their future years. Intially from the very young age he or she can build up a very strong financial source. It helps to settle in the foreign country without discomfort. To illustrate, a person who is getting a job in a small scale factory in his home country, will get more salary in a foreign country. so with a span of years he can be rich from poor background.

Secondly, living in a foreign country will teach us to be a matured and more independent. It make an individual to be self dependented and reliable. But when he is in his home country it is difficult to be progressive person because of lack of experience and the native people in his country.

However, there are also impacts of living and working in foreign country. The people living in their country will try to discriminate through colour. It will create major sort of negetive consicuences on the individuals. And moreover, there are cases where killing and criminal attempts on foreigners from the people in the name of racism.

To sum up, it is important to be migrate to other country, inorder, to survive. It will make us stubborn and more independent than we are now, despite the fact of, our failures in home country. Moreover, it will make us think to work harder and focus towards the goal. So living and working in a foreign country is a good way to settle in life.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, sort of, as well as, to begin with, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalization wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6303630363 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61737604157 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49504950495 0.561755894193 88% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.0872207019 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.8421052632 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9473684211 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94736842105 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304768511927 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105611244793 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12272561819 0.0667982634062 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183712882412 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502754396003 0.056905535591 88% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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