The country is a better place for the children to grow up than a large cities do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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The country is a better place for the children to grow up than a large cities do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Living in small town is better,it is a place of harmony and peacefullness.However,some believes that cities are filled up with advanced facilities.I personally agrees that children should live in a small town to be aware from the effects of pollutions and other harmful problems facing from urban area.

To begin with,small towns are a place were children can build up their relationships.Basically through games for example there are different varities of games especially hide and seek .It allows to interact with new local peoples in that locality and make new friendship which involve them to understand the core value of friendships in their future years.

The second reason is that children can able to eat foods generally grows in the crops which are cultivated by farmers .By the way of illustration,the wheats ,pulses,grains which are cultivated from crops are three times better than foods which are served in restaurants and hotels in cities which lead to health related problems.

However,some people believes that cities are much better place in education for example education for a children is the basic needs .In cities there are different types of schools were a child can learn under the supervision of good trained faculties .It enhance them to build a greater personility through higher education.

Taking throughly all the above mentioned reasons into account .This conclusion can be drawn that ,in order to create a good relationships ,a basic harmoney with fellow people .And to know the pain that comes through hardwork .And the foods that is naturally cultivated on less side effects helps for good health .It is better to live in countryside than living in larger cities .

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Average: 6.5 (3 votes)

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Discourse Markers used:
['however', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'for example', 'by the way', 'to begin with']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.264406779661 0.247107183377 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.196610169492 0.155533422707 126% => OK
Adjectives: 0.105084745763 0.0946595960268 111% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0372881355932 0.0501214627716 74% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0169491525424 0.0437548338989 39% => OK
Prepositions: 0.142372881356 0.122226691241 116% => OK
Participles: 0.0338983050847 0.0403226058552 84% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.11581352954 2.80594681477 111% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0338983050847 0.0326793684256 104% => OK
Particles: 0.00677966101695 0.00163938923432 414% => OK
Determiners: 0.0779661016949 0.0861772015684 90% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0169491525424 0.021408717616 79% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0237288135593 0.011925033212 199% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1708.0 1933.35771543 88% => OK
No of words: 276.0 316.048096192 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.1884057971 6.12580529183 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20517956788 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.351449275362 0.374742101984 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.239130434783 0.28420135186 84% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.170289855072 0.203846283523 84% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.123188405797 0.137316102897 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11581352954 2.80594681477 111% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.037074148 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557971014493 0.56093040696 99% => OK
Word variations: 56.9056917452 60.7387585426 94% => OK
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0891783567 31% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 55.2 20.7743622355 266% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 27.3685951411 49.517814964 55% => OK
Chars per sentence: 341.6 127.492653851 268% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 55.2 20.7743622355 266% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.4 0.814263465372 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 34.0 3.99599198397 851% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 79.1130434783 49.1944974215 161% => OK
Elegance: 1.75675675676 1.69124875643 104% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280484194837 0.332605444948 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.204829866714 0.102741220458 199% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0173596024979 0.0668466124924 26% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 1.0 0.534860350844 187% => Sentence paragraph similarity is high.
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 5.61733354972e-16 0.148594505496 0% => Sentences are similar to each other in a paragraph.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.185252432827 0.134430193775 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0264525182814 0.0742795772207 36% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.254909077865 0.324371583561 79% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.00765656719349 0.0638462369009 12% => Paragraphs are so close to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185252432827 0.228012699653 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264525182814 0.058150111329 45% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.68436873747 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 5.0 10.4468937876 48% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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