Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of public transport
Nowadays, a matter needs to argue that public transport is more efficient than own cars. Both of them have many important advantages and disadvantages can impact to our life. Although public transport do not be prefered than own cars, we can not avoid about widespread of public transport. In this essay, I will dicuss the pros and cons of public transport.
In the one hand, one of the biggest benefits is that will protect the evironment. Secondly, it will appear little vehicles in the roads. Because of reducing the cacbon dioxide esmission, the atmosphere will be cleaned and greenhouse gas can be decreased rabidly.
In addition, the population can save the cost of buy vehicles, movement or pay taxes. We can make new friends or meet my love accidently. Moreover, if we use public transport, we will reduce stress. Because after the timework we always be stress so we have not to focus too much about driving.
In the other hands, public transport just have many drawbacks. Firstly, when the public transport is too many people, we can feel uncomfortable. We can not know what the personality of people in there. There are good person or bad guys. In some situations, there have perverter-the person who have habitation such as hustling and raping.
Thirdly, if we use our cars or motorbike, we can more proactive the time. About public transport, we just have to come every bus station.
However, public transport have many think else, the stout benefits but it is no less harmful. Though we also need to try experienced it once. Above, it is my opinion about public transport.
If we look both side of the argument, there are plus points to use public transport, including air pollution and traffic jam reduction. However, the downside would emerge consequently in terms of the lack of safety and the inconvenient conditions
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'be'.
Suggestion: be always
...e stress. Because after the timework we always be stress so we have not to focus too much...
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Line 4, column 308, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...perverter-the person who have habitation such as hustling and raping. Thirdly, i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92926045016 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72970848307 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569131832797 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.0398850682 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.652173913 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5217391304 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5652173913 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267002886681 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0847800452014 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0915623884732 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138278162107 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111207743547 0.056905535591 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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