Nowadays , the number of people addicted to drugs is increasing and tend to rejuvenate.Our mission is to educate people about the causes and some effects of widespread drug use by young people in modern day society.
There are many causes for this social evils with young generation. Firstly ,lack of attention, concern from family and relatives . If parents are a good role model and have a proper method of teaching children, it will not lead to the situation of teenagers using drugs at school age. secondly,adverse effects from outside such as friends or strangers who seduce and drag to bad places and use illegal drug.Finnally , at this age teenagers like discovering new things so they easily become targets of bad factors such as drugs, gambling, and prostitution
The consequences of drugs are more serious than you think .Your life , your future, your family will all be destroyed by this addictive substance. it not only affect to your health but your family, your friends and other people will also be forced under . Drug addicts have become the burden of society. Therefore stop when possible .
We have to do something to prevent society's vices and help fight youth drug abuse.The government needs to be more strict and have more practical measures to reduce the number of drug addicts. Furthermore, schools in all over the world should educate their students about effect of drugs and how to avoid, In addition ,parents pay more attention to their child such as daily time,their friends, unusual activities.
In conclusion , if everyone is aware of the dangers of drugs, the society will be better especially our descendant
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05925925926 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70336615347 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633333333333 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 107.639358066 49.4020404114 218% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 124.181818182 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5454545455 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1818181818 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238862935607 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804652084006 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0937433051613 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127853545971 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113098919012 0.056905535591 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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