Do you agree or disagree that women are the best manager

Essay topics:

Do you agree or disagree that women are the best manager

Basis of gender a good manager is stands on who is quality of manage all things properly so I am totally a accord female are the toppest managers
To initiate with, females are to handle the children in their homes as well as she also engage with the work for the house in addition to, in home or without her family cannot survive because they make they make food for their children and for family moving further women are bread ceiling they do not dependent on other person to examplify this according to recent survey in the newspaper about 60% women are doing jobs.
Apart from this female also done the country because they are educated paradigmaticallu, Kalpana Chawla who was first woman to go into space moreover women performed multitask at one time also they also care about all relations like sister mother daughter perfectly. Ultimately women are leading all things properly last but not least women they are more patient as compared to men and tackle with all problem confidently
In bird eye view government should also give equal rights to women so they can get higher status in society.

Votes
Average: 9 (2 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 106, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...age all things properly so I am totally a accord female are the toppest managers ...
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Line 1, column 146, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a accord female are the toppest managers To initiate with, females are to handle ...
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Line 2, column 89, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'engages'.
Suggestion: engages
...dren in their homes as well as she also engage with the work for the house in addition...
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Line 2, column 193, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'they make'.
Suggestion: they make
...thout her family cannot survive because they make they make food for their children and for family ...
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Line 2, column 202, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... family cannot survive because they make they make food for their children and fo...
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Line 3, column 315, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ly women are leading all things properly last but not least women they are more p...
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Line 3, column 326, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'not the least'.
Suggestion: not the least
...e leading all things properly last but not least women they are more patient as compared...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, well, apart from, in addition, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 913.0 1615.20841683 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 192.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75520833333 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32778707465 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.671875 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 506.74238477 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 64.0 20.2975951904 315% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 143.30697432 49.4020404114 290% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 304.333333333 106.682146367 285% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 64.0 20.7667163134 308% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 25.6666666667 7.06120827912 363% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141711280907 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0901285300618 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489403565403 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0859960708782 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321384298502 0.056905535591 56% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.0 13.0946893788 252% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 6.52 50.2224549098 13% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.3 11.3001002004 250% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.22 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.18 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 52.0 9.78957915832 531% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 27.6 10.1190380762 273% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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