Do you believe that professional athletes make good role model for young people?
Finding a good role model is an essential task in youngster’s childhood. This essay argues that vocational sportsmen might play such roles for the youth. The Essay will discuss how interest in healthy life style lifestyle and awareness of social problems may surge if promoted by famous people.
Firstly, if one follows some role model, one tries to copy its hero, especially if a hero is a sportsman. Since a sportsman does exercises and workout every day, his fans will do so as well. Indeed, nowadays on the streets of every city, there are plenty of children in football uniform of popular teams, and they play soccer in sport facilities. This is because some children admire famous football players, like C. Ronaldu and Z. Zidane. The youg try to resemble their prototype by playing football. The example demonstrates that the children life quite active live doing sports with friends, and interest in sports is inevitably rising among children and young adults.
In addition, as long as an athlete has a large fan base, members of which watch an athlete’s every step, he or she has a great opportunity to share thoughts of different issues. Hence, a famous sportsman might address different problems society faces, for instance, the global warming. It may be in a form of a social network, a book, or a web site, in does not matter. Therefore the youngsters may become interested in mentioned problems, they will want to do something about it and a few of them probably become scientists or engineers only because their interest was taken by the hero they admire.
In conclusion, the popularity of an athlete allows him or her to advertise healty life style as well as address different issues in science and society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ook, or a web site, in does not matter. Therefore the youngsters may become interested in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, may, so, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93515358362 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70539339048 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62457337884 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3500587754 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5333333333 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137936226585 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0401633561709 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444811608836 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0771419262631 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331298856747 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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