Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some people argue that the paramount problem for the environment is the extinction of particular kinds of animals and plants, while others say that there are more essential issues. I strongly agree that the disappearance of species is not the foremost problem.
On the one hand, the loss of species may jeopardize the local biodiversity and bio balance. If an animal in the food chain cease to exist, other members of the chain may end up in danger of a decline in the number. In turn, such an event could trigger others food chains in a region because chains are related to each other. An avalance occur, perpetrating the bio balance and harming the biodiversity. The example of such a disaster is one island in the Pacific, where poachers killed local cats for fur. Not the island has no life because after the killing of all cats the rats ate all vegetation and every animal died of starvation.
On the other hand, pollution and the contraction of living space for the wildlife jeopardize flora and fauna a lot. As cities grow, more and more toxic waste is produced, as well as more wilderness is populated leaving no room for animals. Consequently, particular kinds of animals become endangered or extinct, and one has all problems mentioned above. For instance, the deforestation in the basin of the river Amazon, which caused extinction of thousands of types of animals and plants, was initiated because of overpopulated towns in Brazil (the cities demanded the expansion). So, pollution and lack of space might be the very reason for species liss and must be tackled or alleviated.
In conclusion, even though the protection of species is vital for biodiversity and bio balance, there are issues which can cause species' extinction, like pollution or contradiction of living space for flora and fauna. These issues are more essential.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, may, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94193548387 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76273703434 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538709677419 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4419524965 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.133333333 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137948949755 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504195091371 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536689043821 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101677407608 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698456456253 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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