Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some people claim that one should give up if adverse events occur (such as the financial difficulties), whilst others insist that one should strive to change the situation. I strongly agree with the latter opinion since it is likely yo lead to success.
Indeed, sometimes the situation is so unpleasant, that it is almost impossible to change anything. So, people do not want to risk their jobs or achievements and choose to wait until the situation is improved. It may be a viable solution, and there are examples of such luck. For instance, during financial crisis in Russia, many of businessmen drop out their firms and ceased trying to prosper/ Nevertheless, a few years later the crisis ended and profits of firms soared, and those who decided to not change things won. However, this strategy is extremely unpredictable because only few problems out of million may solve itself. So the probability is very low.
Conversely, there are individuals who do not concede, they persist and tackle all problems. Such people do not follow the flow of life and strive to bend the situation because they know: if it works out, they will be happy. For example, I have a friend who lost his business after financial crisis. His friends, with whom he initiated the firm, gave up and became low-qualified workers as waiters and servants. But my friend decided to borrow money from me to start a new fast-food restaurant which is now known as McDonalds. This practice of course demand traits of temper like perseverance and stubborness, but it totally worth it.
In conclusion, even though doing nothing sounds simple and may bring one to success, the likelihood of this is quite low. Hence, striving to change the situation is the best option.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, hence, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90136054422 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67441476422 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62925170068 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5563810124 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0625 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.375 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102900388816 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0284146163288 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400468464839 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0636387523563 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476018724319 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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