Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
It is widely believed that accepting a situation which is disturbing like a work which is disappointing or a state of bankruptcy as it makes us a strong person, whereas, some people claim that it is advisable to strive and ameliorate ourselves in such conditions. This essay discusses both the views before drawing concrete decisions.
On the one hand, when we have the potential to live in a strenuous circumstance, it will aid us in improving our willpower as well as building our confidence. It we are enduring a hard situation, it moulds us to be stronger than before. For example, the famous actor, Jackie Williams mentioned in one of his interviews that he had an arduous life in the past which bolstered him to reach heights in his career. One more point worth considering is that it makes us feel complacent as we are able to withstand tough situation. Thereby, we will be having the objective to face any problems without fear.
On the other hand, when we are stuck with only accepting the situations and going with it, we will not be able to achieve a nothing in life. Subsequently, the efficiency of a person plummets. Improving the self should be the sole goal, when going through such unpleasant experiences. Unless something is initiated to come out of the situation, there will be no betterment of ourselves. To illustrate this, the famous author, J.K.Margaret reveals that she was a victim of a fire accident at the age of 18 and explains succinctly that she strived extremely hard to escape from it, if not she will not be existing today.
In conclusion, tough situations can make us strong, however, efforts should be made to come out of it. From my perspective, each individual ought to believe in the self and strive to bring them out of the problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, well, whereas, for example, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75404530744 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86233102721 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582524271845 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.7897677411 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.928571429 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0714285714 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116583270693 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0392483521159 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396370651385 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.073330978178 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572659427236 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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