Do you think the consumer should avoid over packed products or it is the responsibility of the producer to avoid extra packaging of products?” Give your views or any relevant example with your own experience.
Packaging a product gives a new look, feel and prevent it from getting damaged easily but sometimes it crosses the line to being over packed. In recent times over packaging has emerged as a major contributor in creating pollution and needs to be addressed on urgent basis.
What causes a product to be over packed? Is it the consumer or the producer who wants to sell his product with better packaging? Let’s look at the scenario of customer visiting Mac Donald, even for a small takeaway order of a burger and pepsi, the joint provides three level of packaging and customer expects the same. After consuming his meals, he is bound to throw the packaging material either on the streets thus contributing to litter, or to dustbin, thus unnecessary wastage of material and contribution to garbage.
Another case of excessive packaging is while buying electronic or heavy goods but here both the customer and producers have the necessity to do so. As the products needs to be taken utmost care.
No business would like to spend extra on packaging but due to highly competitive market, producers are forced to so, to provide better service. In some cases this is required but in others both the consumer and producer needs to understand and avoid over packaging as they have moral responsibility to our mother nature. Even in cases where over packaging is necessary, consumers and producers needs to come up with ideas and solution so that it can be reused and recycled.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 149, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, so, thus, while, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1232.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90836653386 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65817975099 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601593625498 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6920314527 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8181818182 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254925129649 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102438080499 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567140540832 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142495110158 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334759298773 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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