Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countries many small local business are unable to compete Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities To what extent do you agree o

Globalization renders international companies inevitable. As the number of supermarkets soared, many people claim that most local businesses are often adversely affected, and some believe that this might result in extinction of a few local communities. I strongly agree that expansion of international businesses affect some indigenous shops and will elaborate the same in this essay.

Multinational supermarkets have many advantages over local vendors, of which I will be discussing the most crucial ones. First of all, these companies are often more popular than the local shops as they use the same name all over the world. As a result, these shops are easily remembered and preferred over the local vendors. In addition to this, as these shops have huge financial support, they can attract more people through lucrative discounts to catch the market. These companies commonly believe that heavy investments in the beginning will return higher profits over the years and thus, they reduce their profits by offering more discounts at the start.

On the contrary, most local businesses are often incapable of competing with these giant companies. Since most local shops do not have fund for powerful marketing, they fail to attract new customers and are solely dependent on the local communities. When these community people move towards supermarkets, most local vendors are significantly affected and are often forced to shut down their business. Furthermore, many of these vendors do not possess any other professional skills to cope with the current market and are left jobless. At some cases, these people end their lives as they are unable to afford to the basic needs of their families; resulting in loss of indigenous people and business in those areas.

In conclusion, the growing international business in some cities has certainly engulfed the small local shops and it is clearly evident that these areas are losing their local communities at a detrimental pace.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, so, thus, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33546325879 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79511635503 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539936102236 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0224065596 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.285714286 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3571428571 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306785330033 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11508911621 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818079882359 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219253569579 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0701237428435 0.056905535591 123% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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