Young people spend less of their free time with their family nowadays. What are the reasons for this? Are there more negative or positive sides to it?
The youth of the current generation have complete liberty to decide each and every moment of their life. Due to this unrestrained freedom, many young people do not prefer to spend most of their leisure time with the family. In this essay I will discuss in detail about the reasons for why teenagers do not prefer spending their spare time with the family which I feel has more negative effects.
Nowadays, young people prefer spending most of their leisure time in social media. This is mainly because they are too much addicted to the technology, and do not understand the value of family relations. In a recent survey by ‘Healthy Family’ organization, it was found that the young people of the current generation prefer nuclear family than joint family as they feel their privacy is more important the relations. Similarly, some teenagers love to spend their free time by watching movies or soap opera in television or theatres with their friends as they feel the former makes them more relaxed than the latter. This change in perception towards families and relatives has adversely affected the value of relations.
I personally feel that this change has more negatives than positives as this cultural change will affect the attitude of the next generations. In India, for example, parents used to sacrifice their life for the well-being of their children, and if these children become selfish in the future, these parents would be destitute of love and money. In addition to this, these teenagers do not understand the meaning f love and trust and hence become more self-centered and lack confidence. If these changes continue further, our next generations would not live in harmony of family relations, which will adversely affect the world as well.
In conclusion, as the youth of the current generation is more reliant on technology and spend most of their leisure time in social media and television, they are oblivious about the need for family and relationships, and I feel this is definitely a negative impact on the society.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, similarly, so, well, for example, i feel, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1710.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02941176471 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62789797193 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485294117647 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.5223229434 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.538461538 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1538461538 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.432528182769 0.244688304435 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162163758161 0.084324248473 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0978068412617 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.282736935006 0.151304729494 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.088176156234 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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