Due to transporting goods and people pollution increase. Some people think that government should solve this issue when other think that this is individual responsibility.
In today’s rapidly changing world, emissions from vehicles which transport supplies or people has become one of the most pressing ecological question requiring immediate attention. In the rest of essay, I will proceed to explain why it is concerned that the authority is the one who responsible for this problem and in the same time why some people believe that, every person must be in charge for keeping the environment.
those who agree with this view that only government is able to ameliorate situation with pollutions have a number of reasons to justify their opinion. it is apparent that only head of the country in contradistinction with ordinary people have a great power and can for instance affect entrepreneurs, rising taxes or forcing them to use electricity or gas in lieu of oil. Admittedly, this point of view has its merit but in my opinion, government cannot handle the issue wholly alone.
However, those who agree that every common person must solve the problem of air contamination from shipment goods or transportation people have their own reasons as well. it would be much more fruitful if every person bothered and figured out what he can do personally for the good of the environment. For example, last summer students of Saint Petersburg Mining university succeeded in cleaning of the tremendous square of the local timber without any efforts since there are many non-indifferent students and furthermore they worked in conjunction. In other words, I am convinced that the situation would be improved if we engaged more and more people in.
To conclude, it is evident that due to technological progress the number of miscellaneous vehicles is increasing apace that in their turn can lead to serious environmental consequences such as contaminations of water, soil and air. this essay discussed why every person should concern about that problem and not only government. From my point of view, we able to diminish emissions from cars only together.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 285, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a responsible'.
Suggestion: who is a responsible
...concerned that the authority is the one who responsible for this problem and in the same time w...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Those
... charge for keeping the environment. those who agree with this view that only gove...
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Line 3, column 152, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...er of reasons to justify their opinion. it is apparent that only head of the count...
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Line 5, column 172, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
... people have their own reasons as well. it would be much more fruitful if every pe...
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Line 7, column 233, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
... contaminations of water, soil and air. this essay discussed why every person should...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...h emissions from cars only together.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, so, well, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16358024691 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96566716875 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592592592593 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.1580103396 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.416666667 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183941789611 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635123454964 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424321910762 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102302426865 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274234306938 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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