Each year the crime rate increases. what are the causes of crime and what could be done to prevent this in criminal activity?
Nowadays, It has been observed that crimes are rais annually. In the following essay I will discuss some of the biggest causes associated with high crime rate before suggesting possible solutions.
The main reason related to the crime rate is take drugs such as marijuana and heroin. It is known that drugs control a person and make him act out of his control, so he tends to violence and murder. Another reason that needs to be considered, parents divorce may disrupt the psychological stability of children, and they grow up to violence and crime because of their loss of family containment. In addition, socializing with bad friends may would leed to misdeed. What is more, social media would be one of the reasons to increase violence.
In my opinion, the best way to overcome criminality is to provide a supportive environment for young people for example sports clubs and cultural clubs. Therefore, community activities increase the value of people and give them complete satisfaction with their lives. Another factor to consider is that encouraging the community to volunteer in the service of people. For instance, volunteering in a nursing home, to clarify that volunteer work helps in the refinement of personality. Finally, applying severe penalties to perpetrators of crimes helps reduce the crime rate, because this limits the spread of crime.
In conclusion, because illegal activities have increased each year, It is necessary to know the main reasons such as drugs and family destruction. Furthermore, find quick solutions such as activating collective activities and encouraging volunteering.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1363.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32421875 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92571345048 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62109375 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2444090225 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3571428571 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2857142857 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.78571428571 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295664858163 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814144736133 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715556581501 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14931542211 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00976854891218 0.056905535591 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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