Economic growth in in recent years has made some people richer. However, research shows that while people in developing countries are happier, people in developed countries seem no happier than before. Why this is and what can we learn from it ?
Money can not guarantee people's happiness, It is proved by experts that although economic growth has made people richer, people from developed countries feel less happy than before, In contrast, in poor countries, wealth make them happier. I will discuss the reason why this phenomenon happened.
In the case of developing countries, people's happiness is entered in their life because of increasing their salary as well as, the government provides them the best facility. This happens because when the country's economy is increasing every day and people never ever seen this day in their past so obviously people become happy. In addition, focus on developed countries, these countries already feel this situation and countries economy touch peak so that people growing lifestyle is stopped. when people pass away this situation then people feel nervous due to they less happy than developing countries.
Moreover, developing countries people also buy important things in their life and in the past, it was really hard for them to buy some food and studies in formal education. But today, since they are richer than before, they can get both of those teams. Furthermore, developed countries people fond meals everywhere and able to bought it. Before technology advances, they already wen to work such as farming or work in the factory. They had enough money to preserve them for starving. This is the reason that they are not happy than before.
In conclusion, I must say that we can learn to love our life, It is necessary to do work and earn money but this is not life so we need to enjoy our life with our lovely people. So, we need to thanks for everything we have and we got.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 496, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
...at people growing lifestyle is stopped. when people pass away this situation then pe...
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Line 7, column 194, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'thank'.
Suggestion: thank
... with our lovely people. So, we need to thanks for everything we have and we got.
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, really, so, then, well, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9298245614 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47259152176 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564912280702 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0121380684 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.357142857 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.392527860296 0.244688304435 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128935952792 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102916398683 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238241826128 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118621907667 0.056905535591 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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