In the last 20 years there have been significant developments in the field of information technology (IT), for example the World Wide Web and communication by email. However, these developments in IT are likely to have more negative effects than positive in the future. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the world of today, many thanks to advancement in technology and consequently turning the world into small global village. It can be argued that these development in IT will bring more negative impacts than positive.
To embark on, there are several benefits which come through development in technology. First and foremost, people can contact readily in within seconds, resulting in number of business enhance their communication in other nations. In addition to this, email is widely spread in business related work and in education therefore, people and students can send large file in any nook and cranny of the world. For a real-life example, these days entire international enterprises utilize email to response customer. Furthermore, World Wide Web means that we can connect this network and watch the world as a result, we can access news, medical advice, online education course and many other facilities from internet. It is evidence that these improvements have made life easier and convenient for large number of people and will continue in future.
In contrast, some put down negative impacts of this phenomenon. To begin with, lot of crimes are done by networking sites and from technology equipment. For that, people do not believe in technology advancement. Moreover, people can prefer to use typing method that is why, writing skill is disappeared and new generation people have face difficulty in writing a letter. What is more, plethora of sites are available in market and it is impossible to regulate and control. This has led many concerns regarding children because, shorting of sites are difficult for parents and teachers.
In conclusion, the advancement in technology have both merit and demerit but I believe that advantages outweigh disadvantages because, variety of benefits are crucial for everyday life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 149, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this development' or 'these developments'?
Suggestion: this development; these developments
...l global village. It can be argued that these development in IT will bring more negative impacts ...
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Line 3, column 154, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: resulting
... can contact readily in within seconds, resulting in number of business enhance their communication...
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Line 3, column 833, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...arge number of people and will continue in future. In contrast, some put down negative...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, second, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32534246575 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82443322854 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609589041096 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8005847912 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.666666667 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4666666667 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215543658252 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658128936096 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405663387307 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128274514095 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416938373328 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.