In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because people will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In this technical era, people also become modern and online so that they also find e-book and e-newspaper they want on the internet without purchasing it. I agree with the trend but their advantages outweigh the disadvantages and this essay intends to discuss more about this.
In the first place, there are amount of advantages of online books and newspapers. in the world of today, environment issue is on high priority because pages are necessary for every people so that forest is no longer seen. If individuals use e-copy of every page, that's why we control the environment. In addition, the smartphone is essential in this globe and everyone have, so poor people children often buy a free copy of the e-book and they read it. Which is important for increasing the country's literacy level.
There are some disadvantages to this method. Writers play a notable roll in people's lives, they also spread other people feeling through books and articles. If people buy online without paying money than their art value is no longer exists. moreover, children also become screen-addicted. All device screens are affected to eyes so feel eyes problem in a long time period. For example, Nowaday children learn online lecture so they do not read hard copies of the newspaper, they often access e-copy and the whole day watching mobile is effected on children education and health.
To put it in nutshell, I pen down and saying that, this trend has both pros and cons so people understand which is best for him or her children. The government also finds alternative ways of e-copy becuase this is unhelthy for children as well as older people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...f individuals use e-copy of every page, thats why we control the environment. In addi...
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Suggestion: eye
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, well, for example, in addition, as well as, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92086330935 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56417047788 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604316546763 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.678319056 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5333333333 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215482398639 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692852781326 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614424902425 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137630648038 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0651147335985 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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