As global trade increases between different countries, many daily necessities are produced in other countries. Such goods are usually transported a long distance. Do the benefits of this trend outweigh its drawbacks?
In the world of today, people are more fashionable and their demand for routine products is increasing every day. Now, we don't belong to a big planet we belong to a small global village so that everything is available everywhere. There are many advantages and disadvantages of transporting goods to long distances. In my opinion, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
On the positive side, transporting good to long-distance gives lots of choices. Firstly, we can taste variety of fruit and vegetable which is not fertilised in our countries. In addition, we can introduce numerous of latest technology equipment there through we can finish our work easily without any difficulty. However, various cloth brand and other glossary brand is established in a short period. We can purchase their products without going there, in turn, we should feel comfortable when we wear.
In contrast, Importing good can have a negative effect on local culture. to the beginning, our country's consumerism is decrease due to import international product and some workers become unemployed. Moreover, Pollution is mojor issue of this globe. When good come from thousand of miles by road or sea and air. It increase pollution on a global level. What is more, when international product arrive, our government should take some taxes on this product thus, this product becomes too costly and middle-class families can not afford this international product.
Weighing up all arguments, Importing good have some benefits and some demerits. we can choose which is best for our countries but the pros outweigh the cons.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, thus, in addition, in contrast, in my opinion, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1353.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28515625 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9623054022 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8821304612 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5882352941 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0588235294 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.29411764706 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148066138334 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552410269655 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505234128755 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0929382990962 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259158587751 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.81 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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