In the future, it seems it will be more difficult to live on the earth. Some people think more money should be spent on researching other planets to live, such as Mars. To what extent, do you agree or disagree?
In the world of today, people face various problem and they think, in the upcoming day's it is more tough to living live on the globe. They argue that the government should spent large amount of money on finding other planet which is convenient for people. I support to this statement to a large extend for some reasons. My position is argued further with explanation.
To embark on, there are several reasons of this phenomenon. First and foremost, population is major factor for this problem because, nowadays the population is dramatically increased so that, people can face numerous tackles such as, price of product raised and many other. In addition, accommodation is crucial for everyone therefore, they want some place to construct their house as a result, in future year, people can face lack of places situation. Furthermore, pollution problem is clearly something that is often discuses in today's world, and this will be boomed in coming years.
However, it is important to spent budget on discovering a new suitable home for human. To begin with, natural resources is almost decline in short-term period and without them humans is handicap. That’s why fulfill this requirement it is necessary to searching new planet. Moreover, health is beneficial for everyone and people can live their life without pollution in new globe because, in this the globe industries are not developed completely. What is more, people can invest money to develop this planet and find more opportunity to enhance their business.
In conclusion, I strongly support that financial investments to discovering new planet as a new home replacing earth are reasonable.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 263, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun other seems to be countable; consider using: 'many others'.
Suggestion: many others
...es such as, price of product raised and many other. In addition, accommodation is crucial ...
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Line 5, column 252, Rule ID: IT_IS_JJ_TO_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'search'?
Suggestion: search
...ill this requirement it is necessary to searching new planet. Moreover, health is benefic...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, in short, such as, as a result, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20149253731 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75045309052 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600746268657 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7162515969 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5714285714 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1428571429 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3571428571 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213750405211 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652442409378 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652492010493 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117962004464 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566358280913 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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