Some people think that good health is a basic human need, so the medical service should not be run by profit-making companies. Do you think the disadvantages of private health care outweigh the advantages?
In the world of today, health problem is clearly something that is often discussed in today's world while, some people argue that fitness is crucial for everyone so that, medical facility should not be operated by profit-oriented private companies. Personally, I do not agree with them because the advantages of private health care far outweigh the disadvantages.
To embark on, there are several benefits of private health services to the people. First and foremost, quality of product maintained and focus on accuracy therefore, people can take medicine without any quality doubt. For a real-life example, these days people do not get advice from doctor for some little issue they can take medicine from medical store because they trust on organization. In addition to this, stock of pill is enough for everyone because whole industries of medicine making different kind of medicine, without them it is not possible for government to provide drug in whole nation. Furthermore, medical science become more powerful due to competition and this is beneficial for their countries people because, private companies is capable for researching new medicine for latest disease such as, corona virus.
On contrast side, there are some disadvantages too. To begin with, cost of treatment in these is very high and is not afford many people. Then, because their hospitals have latest expansive equipment and best doctors, the cost of running them is high and sometime expanses of break down is too high. What is more, confusion about medicine is major issue because variety of medicine are available and all are same, but companies is differ, that is why, people get confusion in selection it.
In conclusion, private health care is absolutely necessary. They provide best service regard to any treatment. However, they should available some areas for poor class peoples.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'afforded'.
Suggestion: afforded
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'have the latest'.
Suggestion: have the latest
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'differed'.
Suggestion: differed
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Message: Use simply 'necessary'.
Suggestion: necessary
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, then, therefore, while, as for, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27852348993 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66727866534 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590604026846 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.5519974708 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.357142857 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232059295226 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0839942506432 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707872867675 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150727165621 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0853410361099 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.