We can see more disasters and violence shown on TV. What are its causes and what effects will they exert on the individual and the society?
These days, television media problem is clearly something that is often discussed in today's world. Various shows are available in market which is dangerous for people or society. In the following paragraph I shall discuss the reason of this phenomenon and suggest some ways forward.
To embark on, there are some important reason for this issue. First and foremost, in this challenging phase TV channel must want high TRP for earning money from the channel. If the TRP is high, then business people get more attention toward the channel for advertising and promoting purposes. For real-life example, nowadays people see more advertising because of they should more eager to watch original contain and it is possible when they make attracting shows. In addition to this, people demand is also one reason because they want more violence contain shows so that, media must show all that to its viewers.
On stark contrast, there are many harmful impacts on the individual and society. To begin with, the most disturbing effect on the children and youth. children introduce new ways of crime and they do not have knowledge of its punishment, but they implement on others therefore it is necessary for children to monitories their activity. While, crime rate is increase and most of crime is done by young people because they want shortcut of making money and do sensitive crime such as, kidnapping. If the government should reduce violence, they put some restriction on media.
In conclusion, there are many reasons why media shows too much violence on TV and some step should have taken to decline this because it has a lot of detrimental effect on the individuals and society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probable usage error. Use 'because they' instead.
Suggestion: because they
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Line 5, column 151, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Children
...rbing effect on the children and youth. children introduce new ways of crime and they do...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, therefore, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03225806452 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54772914695 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5770609319 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.334132518 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.285714286 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135402860034 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0437786900016 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403927042655 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0771101587311 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045619127201 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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