Some people think that good health is a basic human need, so the medical service should not be run by profit-making companies. Do you think the disadvantages of the private health care outweigh the advantages?
Some people argue that medical services should be public services only because they are fundamental needs of citizens. In my view, the private sector should also involve in this process because there are more gains then drawbacks.
On the one hand, it is true that revenues may affect medical decisions which are critical to patients. One primary reason is that doctors may prioritize profits over the best option for the patient. In fact, private health entities are known for expensive bills, which may be over the patients' budget. Moreover, they may recommend extra check-ups and inspections that are not necessary for the person purely because of money motivations. Another reason is that private hospitals tend to suggest extended recovery time and in-hospital care. Though extra days in the intensive care facility is beneficial for the person, its cost can be a huge burden for them when they are discharged.
On the other hand, private healthcare businesses deliver distinct benefits to their customers. First of all, many wealthy people are willing to pay for premium services on top of essential offers. As health is of vital to most people, they are ready to pay if the quality of care is up to their standards. Secondly, private hospitals offer a wide range of services for people of all ages such as personalized healthcare or mental consultations which traditional counterparts do not provide. These new offers not only deliver exceptional care and treatments but also support people prevent illness. Last but not least, public facilities may not be sufficient for a booming population, so additional supplement from another sector is critical to ensure the coverage of healthcare providers.
In conclusion, though profit-oriented businesses pose certain limitations due to their primary motivation in the healthcare industry, their distinct benefits outweigh the shortcomings.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, in conclusion, in fact, such as, first of all, in my view, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1603.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37919463087 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8454416958 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587248322148 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2434788927 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.866666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8666666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190256409193 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625090620004 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051171426532 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112946936689 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540739595975 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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