Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
People have different views about the most joyful stage of life. While some persons argue that teenage is the cheeriest period, I believe that people are happier later in life.
On the one hand, it is a common belief that teens have a more positive outlook toward life. First and foremost, this group of people are known for their youth and energy. They feel that they can accomplish anything with their physical stamina. Secondly, the great nurturing environment which is maintained by their caring parents safeguard adolescents from undesirable elements of life. Finally, young people have more time to enjoy themselves due to limited accountabilities and expectations from others. According to a recent research, teens tend to spend more time for recreational activities as compared to adults.
On the other hand, it seems to me that mature individuals enjoy their life more because of various factors. Primarily, this group has controls over their life that result in upbeat mood. Moreover, most of adults are financial independent from others due to incomes from professional jobs and other sources. Consequently, they can possess desired materialistic objects to cheer themselves up. In contrast, teens typically cannot purchase their favorite items due to short of money. Furthermore, grownup people tend to overcome more challenging problems because of their strong mental stamina. As they are more fulfill in life after these accomplishments, adult could reach a higher stage of happiness.
In conclusion, even though teenage is a joyful and memorial period of life, I believe that grownup individuals are more contented.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 198, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the adults') or simply say ''most adults''.
Suggestion: most of the adults; most adults
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, first, furthermore, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4140625 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83045484143 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6015625 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.4286607141 49.4020404114 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.625 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5625 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21198145057 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699595970913 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520729128959 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138391184561 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516616741792 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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