Education is considered as strongest pillar for any country, this is why several opine that it should be mainly focused in developmental plan. I completely disagree with the given statement, however, for all round development, government need to work on various other essentials. In this essay, I will discuss certain other sectors which are also equally crucial for any nation.
The importance of education is undeniable in development of human society. It is said by some that f you want to change the country then education is most powerful weapon by which all paths of success will be conquered. However, there are numerous positives of improved educational facilities such as, this would deliver quality of knowledge and skills to the students which helps in obtaining good grades and better jobs. Secondly, education turns people in to more responsible and better person for example, some times on the road side it is clearly written that parking is prohibited then it does not make any sense to an illiterate but an educated one can understand it easily and behave responsibly.
On the other hand, there are plethora other factors which should be taken it to consideration during making improvement strategy for the country, first and foremost is, medical field, because an outstanding medical care provides life security to citizens. Apart from this transportation upgradation should be taken in to account by the government because improved transport facilities play a vital role in relocation of goods from factories to consumer markets if this essential field left in trailing mode the economical growth would be slowdown. Furthermore, tourism is another area which should also be emphasized in improvement criteria because it can contribute in financial gain to the respective nation. Finally, environmental sustainability is another aspect which must be given equal attention by the governments in their development projects, a drive should initiated to plant more trees which will assure more rain fall consequently the crop production would be inclined which will improve financial condition of farmers and home country.
To conclude, along with education there are various other essential fields such as medical, transportation, tourism, as well as agriculture hugely effect in economical boost of a country thus government should be balanced with these all important factors.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e trees which will assure more rain fall consequently the crop production would b...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, apart from, for example, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2049.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47860962567 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96208455127 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 642.6 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.880699181 49.4020404114 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 170.75 106.682146367 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.1666666667 20.7667163134 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.1666666667 7.06120827912 201% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126367046564 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586381178234 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689741111374 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0842499707281 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628922498163 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.0 13.0946893788 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.1 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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