A highly controversial topic relates today whether to have medical trials on animals for human benefits or this should be abolished due to the fact that it is an inhuman act. this essay will examine the question from both point of the view
then explain why I believe that testing on animal should be continued.
There are various reasons to continue this medical testing on animals. First and foremost is that the species which are used for trial purposes their population rate is enormously high. There is nothing like that they will be extinct in few tails. Secondly, due to this policy scientist have developed uncountable numbers of medicines that have been playing a crucial role in treating several deadly diseases, if these medicines would not have developed, human society could suffer beyond the imagination. However, testing on animals is not always lead them to death because these tests are generally supervised by skilled scientists, for example, in antivenom making process the specialists inject snake's venom in very little volume into horses' body though, that is not enough to kill them and after few weeks injected venom turn in into antibody then extracted, processed as antivenom which saves people from unwanted death.
On the other hand, there are a considerable number of masses who are against these phenomena for certain reasons. Firstly they think that during these medical trails animal like monkeys, rats and other suffer a lot in light of the fact that when chemical substances are injected into their bodies, it creates immense pain. Furthermore, in some people's perspective, humans have no right to mistreat any animals for their own selfishness rather governments and scientists should look forward to other alternatives where there is no cruelty involved.
In conclusion, medical scientists have the responsibilities to assure and secure human's lives from unwanted death as well from painful diseases, this is the reason that they should conduct medical trials on animals when there is a necessity
[06:04, 13/06/2021] Rahul: Some people say that it is necessary to use animals for testing medicines intended for human use. Others, however, think it is cruel and unnecessary. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1903.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24242424242 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60203300908 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578512396694 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 588.6 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 115.026521254 49.4020404114 233% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 146.384615385 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9230769231 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.76923076923 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357458118106 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119075285141 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10225001196 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196817450342 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.214386655717 0.056905535591 377% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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