Some people say that it is necessary to use animals for testing medicines intended for human use. Others, however, think it is cruel and unnecessary. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is true that people have different views on whether animals should be used for medical experiments for the sake of human or not. While many people claim that it is cruel and should be prohibited, I am in favor of this method for medical treatments.
On the one hand, there are a few reasons why people oppose to experiments on animals. Obviously, it is cruel and inhumane to subject animals to this kind of trauma. In fact, in the laboratories where animals are experimented, they have to suffer from physical pain, even with deprivation of food and water. Additionally, the cost of animal experimentation is exorbitant, so large amounts of state budget are expended on the establishment of facilities and human resources. It is believed that that money should be spent on other important fields such as education or technology.
On the other hand, it is true that there is no other effective alternative to animal experimentation, therefore it is still necessary. First, experiments need to be implemented on animals to discover new medications and or treatments to save people’s life. Currently, even supercomputers are unable to understand the workings of complex organ such as brain or heart, so despite of the inhumanity of this method, there is no other choice for medical developments. Due to biological similarity, people still are reliant on animal testing. In fact, for many years, chimpanzees have been used to investigate new advanced treatments, and some serious diseases such as cancer or heart attacks have been cured successfully thank to this approach.
In conclusion, although animal testing is against the human morality and costs a huge of fortune, protection of human life can justify animal’s suffering.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, still, therefore, while, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16312056738 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10620485904 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553191489362 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7288624526 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6923076923 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244664664533 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0833724100235 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624288143903 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15261497145 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583436826834 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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