Environmental protection is the responsibility of politicians, not individuals as individuals can do too little. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is commonly believed by some that only the government should be responsible for the preservation of the environment. Nevertheless, I completely disagree with this viewpoint as both the government and each individual should be involved in this issue together. The justifications for this are as follows.
On the one hand, it is true that there are some problems impossible for individuals to deal with. To embark on, such severe issues as prolonged droughts, violent storms, and other extreme weather conditions can merely be effectively tackled with the aid of many politicians and national organizations as solving them requires cutting-edge technology and large numbers of skilled, experienced scientists cooperating. For instance, it takes years for researchers to collect various samples, analyze huge amounts of data in order to find out the major causes of global warming, thereby coming up with the most feasible solutions to combat this problem.
On the other hand, every single person should also be encouraged to take part in the fight against environmental degradation. This is because without the assistance and unanimity of individuals, environmental issues will never be successfully mitigated. A salient example is that many people continue acts of deforestation despite the government’s regulations, which results in losses of natural habitats and then an ecological crisis. Various species of flora and fauna, hence, are put on the brink of extinction.
By way of conclusion, I reaffirm my state that protecting the environment is the obligation of not only politicians but also individuals.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, nevertheless, so, then, for instance, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52016129032 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24036784037 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657258064516 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.2663805103 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.454545455 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5454545455 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09090909091 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100688208202 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0373086390362 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.033279248753 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0618372753082 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236781537958 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.27 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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