The pie charts below compare water usage in San Diego California and the rest of the world

Essay topics:

The pie charts below compare water usage in San Diego, California and the rest of the world.

The three supplied charts compare the amount of water utilized for various purposes (namely residential, industry, and agriculture) in San Diego, California, and the world as a whole.

Overall, it is evident that a significant proportion of water usage is allocated to residential reasons in the two American regions. On a global scale, nevertheless, it is agriculture that consumes a vast majority of water.

Looking at the information in more detail, with regard to residential water consumption, the figures for San Diego County and California were 60% and 39% respectively, ranking first among other classifications, compared to a mere 8% of the world. Global water use for agriculture, in stark contrast, registered a massive 69% of total water consumption, more noticeably higher than those of San Diego (17%) and California (28%).

Such extreme disparities are not seen in the category of industrial water usage. In San Diego, 23% of total water was used for industrial purposes, which is similar to the statistics for worldwide industrial consumption, while the figure for California was 10% higher, standing at approximately a third.

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Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, nevertheless, so, third, while, with regard to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 967.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40223463687 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21821654013 2.65546596893 121% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620111731844 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.5710801383 43.030603864 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.142857143 112.824112599 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5714285714 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.23603664747 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331395952407 0.215688989381 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149377758483 0.103423049105 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0911119403573 0.0843802449381 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203876147513 0.15604864568 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0924476732218 0.0819641961636 113% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.2329268293 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 61.2550243902 61% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 11.4140731707 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.08 8.06136585366 125% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 40.7170731707 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 11.4329268293 144% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.0658536585 154% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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