WRITING TASK 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The table below provides statistics on several major metro (MRT) systems around the world.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words
Given is a graph providing a comparison of age, length and capacity of metro systems in six different regions (namely London, Paris, Tokyo, Washington DC, Kyoto, and Los Angeles).
It is apparent from the information supplied that older metro systems are longer and more crowded compared to newer ones.
Looking at the details, the most ancient MRT is located in London. It was constructed in 1863 with a total length of 1100 kilometres, which is approximately double that in Paris. Second in terms of age is the metro system of Paris, which was built in 1890 and is also the second largest system, at 594 kilometres. The two newest and also shortest metro stations, meanwhile, come from Kyoto and Los Angeles. They were built in 1980 and 2001, and are 11 and 14 kilometres in length respectively.
It is also interesting to note that Tokyo has the most productive metro system than any other places listed, with 1434 million passengers every year. This is followed by the Paris system, with 850 million. Come bottom of the list are that of Washington DC and Kyoto as these two metro systems carry just some 70 and 11 million passengers each year respectively.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 333, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'also the shortest'.
Suggestion: also the shortest
..., at 594 kilometres. The two newest and also shortest metro stations, meanwhile, come from Ky...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 962.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5926048677 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9241347957 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 5.23603664747 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107202624582 0.215688989381 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0440180343314 0.103423049105 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0288725143443 0.0843802449381 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0712425585232 0.15604864568 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0123243383061 0.0819641961636 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.