It is argued that music play a vital role in connecting people around the world at all ages and in all cultures. First, this essay agrees that listening to music would be able to bring people together and second, this essay will explain why music is a bond between people.
First of all, there are a number of songs nowadays in the world and people could enjoy listening those songs without understand the lyrics. Therefore music is consider as a connection between people which surpass language barriers. In addition, people all around the world are able to gather in a music festival or a music concert to enjoy the songs with other music aficionados. A lot of music concerts were held in many countries, BLACKPINK for example, a music world tour which attracted numerous of audiences from every countries when it was first held in Chicago.
Second of all, it do not require a person to be an expert or have a lot of experiences to able to enjoy listening to music. Thus, people from every countries and in any age could connect with each other and have an online chat about a song. When listen to a foreign music, it is easily for people to fall in love with that song or its country even they might not understand what that song is all about. For example, Despacito is a Spanish song which have reached over 6 billion views on Youtube although over a half of that number are from foreign viewers.
In conclusion, music is a valuable way when it comes to bringing people together despite their cultures and their ages.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, so, therefore, thus, for example, in addition, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1254.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59340659341 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36977936341 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516483516484 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.4968421633 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 114.0 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8181818182 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09090909091 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245350026504 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106520176765 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666234729749 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17296233108 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529717504408 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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