Every country should have a free health service even if this means the latest medical treatment may not be available through the services because they are too expensive To what extent do you agree or disagree

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Every country should have a free health service, even if this means the latest medical treatment may not be available through the services because they are too expensive.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Submitted by Ojimson on Tue, 06/23/2020 - 22:34

Free medical service should be made available in every country, even if exorbitant health treameants are not available through the service. I vehemently agree with this opinion with the following reasons,

First and foremost, free health service is necessary in every society in other to prevent illnesses through health education. It is an irrefutable fact that minor health conditions may trigger detrimental health defects if left untreated, however, with proper education from medical personnel and preventive measures such disorders could be eradicated. For example, it is absolutely pivotal that to remain healthy, individuals requires intake of of adequate nutrition in their right proportion; carbohydrate, protein, fat and oil, minerals etc. Admittedly, research from the world health organization estimated that more than 50 thousand children and adults suffer from malnutrition annually. In addition, the poor and the wealthy individuals are affected thus indicating that, majority of the population need to be health educated on the need the take in balance diets even with little income.

Further and even more importantly, emergency cases such road traffic accidents, acute asthmatic attack,cardiac arrest, cardiovascular disorders and cerebrovascular accident can be attended to without much complications with sustainable and affordable health care system. Moreso, patients with little or no income would not indulge in self medication which could lead to a more disastrous outcome.

Summarily, if preventive measures are ensured, life threatening diseases can be averted through free medical services. I therefore recommend that government should take action by providing primary and secondary health care system to it citizens.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, thus, for example, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.9094488189 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01843232852 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665354330709 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.4049584237 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.1 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241914266451 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0982665413163 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104554520851 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162530806019 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101625845481 0.056905535591 179% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.0946893788 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 20.72 50.2224549098 41% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.29 12.4159519038 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.78 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 31, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
Free medical service should be made available in every country, even if...
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Line 1, column 73, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...made available in every country, even if exorbitant health treameants are not ava...
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...lth treameants are not available through the service. I vehemently agree with thi...
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...ion; carbohydrate, protein, fat and oil, minerals etc. Admittedly, research from ...
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...e ensured, life threatening diseases can be averted through free medical services...
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...cal services. I therefore recommend that government should take action by providi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, thus, for example, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.9094488189 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01843232852 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665354330709 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.4049584237 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.1 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241914266451 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0982665413163 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104554520851 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162530806019 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101625845481 0.056905535591 179% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.0946893788 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 20.72 50.2224549098 41% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.29 12.4159519038 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.78 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.