Every year more and more students choose to study online rather than attend classes on campus. What do you think are the causes of this?. What solutions cna you suggest?
Online education has become increasingly popular. Each year more students tend to study online instead of the traditional way of classes on-campus. This essay will discuss why this is happening and suggest several capable solutions for this issue.
First and foremost, university scholars tend to study e-learning because of the convenience factor. Put simply it is far easier to study from one's bedroom than to travel to university every day, especially if the university is located far from where one lives. For example, a recent study in a major university suggests that 80% of undergraduates, who live on the other side of the city, find that studying online is much convenient. Consequently, as technology provides online education, individuals will seldom attend classes in person since they can study wherever they are, whenever they want.
Moreover, another reason why students are opting for distance learning over in-class study is because of the effectiveness of learning technology. Every day there are breakthroughs in e-learning that improve the traditional learning technology techniques. For instance, uploaded videos allow individuals to stop and pause these videos, which contribute to the comprehension of the subject matter. Therefore, these techniques make online learning surpass classroom-based learning.
Despite the rapid development of technology and the exodus of students from on-campus classes, there are measures that universities can take to remediate this issue. Firstly, they could stop broadcasting their lectures online. Secondly, they could improve their on-campus resources. Finally, they could foster an on-campus community. These all measures could bring back students to classes.
In conclusion, year-on-year students are choosing to study online rather than classroom-based education. This essay discussed the causes of why students are being off-campus, such as how distance learning is more convenient and effective. Likewise, this essay suggested some solutions including, improving on-campus resources and techniques.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, if, likewise, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1774.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.89368770764 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03268217577 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581395348837 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.9315352964 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3684210526 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8421052632 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.89473684211 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272300928669 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0818924460276 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0763666016434 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167041593359 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108687295813 0.056905535591 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.59 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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