It is extensively argued that by cutting down in number of language throughout the world, it would be more convenient for people to communicate and live in a harmony. This essay agrees surely with this idea and will discuss how it would affect communities.
On the one hand, languages play a vital role in illustration of a nation either authenticity or history. As a matter of the fact, identity of people is embedded in the way they speak, in other word, the tradition and custom express mere by people native languages. So as long as people tend to leave their native language, it would align with burial of their history that enormous number of people appreciate and feel honored to possess them. As a transparent example, Persian language is highly well-known for the prominent ancient culture and civilization of its territories, although nowadays Iranians are immigrating to other countries in order to have better life. This fact has numerously not only contributed to new generations not being able to speak Farsi any more, but resulted in being stranger with their originality spontaneously. Nevertheless, now the major purpose of countries is to keep t pace with evolution in technology and new trend of living that mainly acquire adeptness in an international language indirectly.
On the other hand, globalization intensively requires people with fewer languages all over the world. As a consequence, having fewer languages all over the world relieve the process of business or sharing latest knowledge. For instance, during recent decade, scientific research journals that are backed by top-ranking Universities such as Imperial College London, Colombia University, UCLA or so on are publishing in English. Not being able to reading in English, lecturer and student couldn’t readily access to recent academic and industrial information. Besides, having a single language would make people all over the world closer to each other n matter where there are located. Actually, maybe human beings have not encountered with epidemic of war in several countries if they speak the same language, as English countries have never participate in a war against each other.
To put it into nutshell, it would be practically wise if people round the sphere would have less language since it not only bring peace, but would have direct effect on acquisition of recent knowledge and living advancement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, but, if, may, nevertheless, so, then, well, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2029.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 386.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25647668394 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92894753406 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580310880829 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 645.3 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.370035739 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.266666667 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7333333333 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86666666667 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156459555291 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0564240644092 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0329105377208 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0984572206312 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344747454893 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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