Every year several languages die out every year. Some people think that it is not important because life will be easier when there are fewer languages. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In the today’s rapidly developing globalized World, minority languages have become one of the most controversial problems requiring immediate attention. In what comes next, I will do my best to explain why we should protect these languages from extinction.
While there are a number of possible way to justify my position, one of the main arguments in this debate is that language is the important part of culture and history. If language dies out, whole nation will risk to lose its roots, origin, and continuity. One can take literature that was written in one of dead languages as an example. As a rule, such books describe significant moments of past life or vital thoughts of our ancestors and we aren’t able fully understand the main idea of texts, even though we would try to learn such language, we wouldn’t speak it, that’s why It is difficult to catch the key point of manuscripts.
On the other hand, that is so true that global language is very positive phenomenon and it has their merits. Firstly, it opens borders between different countries. If you speak world language, travelling will become much easier for you. Furthermore, global language unites various nations. For instance, now scientists from all over the world speak and make presentations of their inventions only in English, this fact, of course, fosters scientific progress.
To conclude, I consider that in the future more and more people will speak English, as a global language. However, it is also crucial not to forget your own language and try to save it for future generations. In other words, every educational person should learn at least two languages: mother and world.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, while, at least, for instance, of course, in other words, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09398496241 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82969852391 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654135338346 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.9477225903 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7857142857 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07142857143 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137904197852 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0473692839425 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356028875786 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0794025281812 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00988496088655 0.056905535591 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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